Feedback and recommendations to revise the research Proposal on Tutankhamun Order Description Assignment: Provide Feedback and recommendations to revise the research Proposal on Tutankhamun Title of Research proposal: Tutankhamun and Ankhkeperure: a Translation of the Inscriptions from the Tomb of Tutankhamun Pertaining to Ankhkeperure Smenkhkere and Ankhkheperure Neferneferuaten Tasks to be done 1) Give a 2-3 sentence summary of what you think the proposed research is about: 2) What do you like most about this piece of writing? 3)What do you think is the biggest weakness of this piece of writing? Recommendations for the revision process: 1. Macro revision: The big picture: 1.1 Structure/paragraphing: 1.2 Argumentation: 1.3 Citing other sources: 2. Micro revision: The little things 2.1 Cohesion: 2.2 Readability: 2.3 Formality: A document titled " Feedback Template for Research Proposal" is attached. Please use this to write the assignment.

Feedback and recommendations to revise the research Proposal on Tutankhamun Order Description Assignment: Provide Feedback and recommendations to revise the research Proposal on Tutankhamun Title of Research proposal: Tutankhamun and Ankhkeperure: a Translation of the Inscriptions from the Tomb of Tutankhamun Pertaining to Ankhkeperure Smenkhkere and Ankhkheperure Neferneferuaten Tasks to be done 1) Give a 2-3 sentence summary of what you think the proposed research is about: 2) What do you like most about this piece of writing? 3)What do you think is the biggest weakness of this piece of writing? Recommendations for the revision process: 1. Macro revision: The big picture: 1.1 Structure/paragraphing: 1.2 Argumentation: 1.3 Citing other sources: 2. Micro revision: The little things 2.1 Cohesion: 2.2 Readability: 2.3 Formality: A document titled " Feedback Template for Research Proposal" is attached. Please use this to write the assignment.