ROLE OF DIET AND EXERCISE IN THE PREVENTION OF TYPE 2 DIABETES IN PEOPLE WITH IMPAIRED GLUCOSE TOLERANCE”

ROLE OF DIET AND EXERCISE IN THE PREVENTION OF TYPE 2 DIABETES IN PEOPLE WITH IMPAIRED GLUCOSE TOLERANCE”   Order Description . After that the whole dissertation will be submitted. The proposal of the dissertation has been approved, I will upload it in my account, but with the following feedback ( This is an interesting proposal but the writing style needs a lot of improvement. There are too many statements giving results from publications but these are no put into context or have much connection with the next sentence. There are a lot of typos. Some sections are repetitive (e.g. Aims and Research Questions). The search terms are naïve and it is difficult to understand how they will address the title of the research (which is about the role of diet and exercise in prevention) and therefore the need to be made much more specific. Six studies are mentioned in the table but there is no description of how these were obtained. The dissertation will need to be far more focused.