Scientific method class

this is a research paper for Scientific Method class. i provided the outline, please edit what the instructor said for the outline, she says; "'you are asking a good research question but your study methods are very unclear on how exactly you propose to measure the variables you are interested in, while also controlling for possible alternative explanations.'' ''Also, none of your sources are empirical studies. To design an empirical study for this research paper, you need to read at least 3 empirical studies to see how other researchers studied this topic'' please revise what she said about the methods and also use empirical studies, and be careful for what the instructions say about writing this paper. attached are the outline and the instructions please the paper has to be free from plagiarism because it will be turned in through TURNITIN . and it has to be 7 pages + cover page and the references page